6:4 Presenting Patisa

October 31st. Halloween. I show up with cat ears. I am the only one in the class who did anything for halloween so that was a little embarrassing but it doesn't matter because Steve and Brian want us all to present our work so far to them with the content below and so I made a presentation.

I changed my story/idea from "it looks better than it tastes" to "unexpected look, unexpected taste" because it just worked better and I gave Steve, Brian and everyone in my group presentation some patisa to try and their reactions to the look and taste of it fit my story perfectly.

I then talked about the content I was doing, so the normal/halloween pamoji's and the shadow challenge and my results from those.

This is the feedback I got from Brian:

He and Steve mentioned that me targeting people who already know patisa doesn't make any sense if my story is that it's unexpected which made complete sense to me after. Brian also mentioned that I needed to vamp up my emojis which offended me a little because I loved them but hey you gotta kill your babies if you want them to grow (this doesn't make any sense but it's something a teacher of mine used to say. Kill your babies - kill the amazing first draft of work you've produced because in reality it sucks), he talked about dressing them up with t-shirts or anything to get the message of it being an unexpected look across.

They also said they didn't think the shadow thing works but it's only been a day since I posted so I wanted to test it out a little further because I have hope.